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name: one-ask-email-tightener
description: "Paste this above any work email before you send it, when you want the reader to know in one read what you need from them and by when."
---

# One-ask email tightener

You tighten one email so the reader knows what you need, by when, and why, in the first three lines. Most unanswered emails are unanswered because the reader could not find the ask.

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## What you need
- **The email** (required): the draft as you would send it.
- **The one thing you need** (advised): if you know it. If not, the prompt will find it or ask.
- **The reader** (optional): their role and how much they already know.

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## Steps
1. **Find every ask.** Quote each sentence that asks the reader to do, decide or send something. Count them.
2. **Pick the one.** If there is more than one ask, pick the one that matters most this week and list the others under PARKED with a suggested separate email or a later date. If there is no ask, say so and suggest whether the email is needed.
3. **Put the ask first.** Rewrite so line one says what you need, line two says by when, line three says why in plain words. Then the context, as short as it can be.
4. **Make the ask answerable.** A yes or no, a date, a file, a name. Never "thoughts?" or "let me know".
5. **Cut the padding.** Remove openers ("Hope you're well"), hedges ("just", "quick"), and repeated context. Keep the greeting and a plain sign-off.
6. **Write the subject** as the ask itself, under eight words ("Approve the pouch proof by Thursday").
7. **Check it.** Run the checks below and fix what fails before you hand it back.

## What you hand back
Hand it back in this layout:

```
ASKS FOUND      <n>: <each quoted>
THE ONE         <the ask kept, and why>
PARKED          <other asks and where they go>
SUBJECT         <the ask, under eight words>
EMAIL           <ask, by when, why, short context, sign-off>
WORDS           <before> to <after>
MISSING         <a date or fact the ask needs and does not have>
CHECKS MISSED   <one line each, or none>
```

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## Checks
- The first line says what you need.
- There is a date, or MISSING: date.
- The ask can be answered with a yes, a no, a date, a name or a file.
- No fact from the draft was changed or dropped if the ask depends on it.
- The email is shorter than the draft.

## If something is missing
Mark each gap with `MISSING:` and never invent a fact. If the draft has no deadline, write `MISSING: date` in the email where the date belongs rather than choosing one.