Hire an AI short pitch feedback planner

Everything it can hand back

Your task sets the actual outputs. The specialist picks the methods that cover them.

• A short pitch from belief to method to what you make
• A line-by-line check of which persuasion is true, unproven or fake, and a cleaner rewrite
• The hardest objections with fair answers, the fact that would sink your case and what your evidence cannot show
• A doubt log sorted by problem, market, team and place, a rewritten pitch and one advice question for the next meeting

How it does the job well

• Research the buyer and their company before writing. One specific, true detail beats ten generic lines.
• Lead with the buyer's problem and outcome, not your features.
• Give every message one clear, low-effort next step.
• Qualify honestly. Record budget, authority, need and timing as known, unknown or assumed.

Mistakes it avoids

• Making claims about results, prices or terms that are not approved.
• Long first messages that ask for too much.
• Updating pipeline numbers on hope rather than evidence.

What a good result looks like

An example, not your task: You are pitching an idea, a business or a cause to investors, a boss, a board or a group.

• Step 1: Why-first pitch. A short pitch that moves from your belief to how you act to what you make.
• Step 2: Honest edit. Each line marked true, unproven or fake, with a cleaner rewrite and a list of changes.
• Step 3: Hardest objections. Ranked objections with fair answers, the fact that could sink your case, and what your evidence can't show.
• Step 4: Pitch revision log. A doubt log sorted by group, a rewritten opening, what to keep and one advice question for your next meeting.
• HAND-BACK SUMMARY. Each step's file, any step not run, and every MISSING line in one list.

How the work is checked

• Each step passed its own checks, or the run stopped at the step that failed and says why.
• The steps ran in order, and each one used the result of the one before.
• Nothing was invented to fill a gap. Every gap is a MISSING: line.
• Nothing was sent, published or paid for without a clear yes.
• States which checks passed, failed or could not run, and names missing inputs.

These checks have not been run against a model yet. Your AI uses them to check its own work.

A second opinion

Before it hands back, your AI reviews the draft the way Melanie Perkins and Alan Turing would. This is a way of reviewing the work. It does not mean they wrote or endorse it.

Capabilities

• Write the why-first pitch. Writes your usual pitch as a baseline, finds the belief behind the work and rebuilds the message from belief to how to what you make.
• Strip out what you cannot prove. Marks the persuasion lever behind each line, checks it against your facts, removes fake ones and keeps at most two true ones.
• Answer the hardest objections. Lists the objections, including silly ones, answers the strongest fairly, names the fact that would sink the case and says what your evidence cannot show.
• Pause and pitch to five people. You give the pitch to people who can say no and write each no in their words, with who said it.
• Revise from the nos. Logs the real doubt behind each no, sorts and counts them, rewrites the opening around the problem and market size, and keeps what survived.

How the role works

1. Checks your task, context and available tools.
2. Picks the methods needed and prepares a work plan.
3. Carries out supported tasks, with each method's limits and review gates.
4. Checks the real deliverables and corrects supported faults.
5. Hands back files, evidence and unresolved gaps.

Your specialist's working setup

Download the base specialist without a task form or account. README.md and SETUP.md explain how to use the folder. SOUL.md defines its scope. INTAKE.md asks missing questions inside your AI. PLAYBOOK.md, SKILLS.md, BEST_PRACTICES.md, CHECKS.md and HANDOFF.md guide the work and its checked deliverables.

Complete associated skills, supporting files and licences are included. Choose only the methods needed for the actual task. Keep context, working files and accepted feedback in your AI project.

Use this specialist through MCP or the API

Call prepare_specialist with role_id write-a-short-pitch-and-fix-it-after-every-no only. No task is required to load it. Your AI asks what job you need done, what you want back and which relevant context it can use.

For task-led hiring, call find_specialist, explain the suggested specialists and let the user accept or change the team.

Complete ZIP: Download base specialist. API: GET /api/v1/specialists/write-a-short-pitch-and-fix-it-after-every-no/pack. The host AI supplies its own model, tools and execution; a pack does not connect accounts or run a task.

Inputs and helpful context

The specialist starts from the task brief. Only active methods require their inputs.

For the primary method, when used

• Your idea or cause and who you want to reach
• Facts you can prove, numbers with sources, results, quotes you may use
• Why you started, in your own words
• Your brand file or buyer profile (optional)
• After the pause, each no you heard, who said it and their words

Tools and access

• Any good chat AI: Rewriting a pitch in a new order is text work any strong chat AI does well with this skill.
• A voice recorder: Say your why out loud first and paste the transcript; it is often plainer than what you write.
• Any good chat AI: Marking and rewriting copy is text work any strong chat AI does well with this skill.
• Your sales or review data: It holds the real numbers a lever needs to be true.
• Any good chat AI: Arguing against your case and rewriting the text is work any strong chat AI does well with this skill.
• A friend who disagrees: A real doubter finds objections no list has.
• Any good chat AI: Sorting doubts and rewriting a pitch is text work any strong chat AI does well with this skill.
• A spreadsheet: To keep the doubt log across many meetings.

Functions and deliverables

• Short pitch feedback planner: Share the idea, audience and evidence. Get a short pitch, answers to hard questions and a revision log after real feedback.
  • A short pitch from belief to method to what you make
  • A line-by-line check of which persuasion is true, unproven or fake, and a cleaner rewrite
  • The hardest objections with fair answers, the fact that would sink your case and what your evidence cannot show
  • A doubt log sorted by problem, market, team and place, a rewritten pitch and one advice question for the next meeting
• Belief-led message writer: Turn a pitch that opens with your product into a why-first message. Give your cause and audience, and get belief, how, then what.
  • Your usual pitch as a baseline
  • The belief, how you live it and who it is for
  • A short message that goes belief, how, then what
  • Which version to use, and which features were recast
• Persuasion and claim editor: Share your message and facts you can prove. Find supported, missing or false persuasion claims, then get a clearer rewrite and change notes.
  • A list of levers used, line by line, marked true, unproven or fake
  • Fake levers removed, and each one listed
  • One or two true levers added, each sourced
  • A rewrite in your voice, with a note on what changed
• Pitch objection and answer writer: Find the toughest objections to your pitch or argument. Paste it and your evidence, get fair answers, open gaps and a rewrite that admits its limits.
  • A list of the hardest objections, each answered or marked as an open gap
  • A rating on each answer: solid, partial or open
  • The one fact that would sink your case
  • A plain note on what your evidence cannot show
  • A rewritten text with the objections built in
• Pitch feedback and revision tracker: Share your pitch and feedback. Get repeated doubts, changes you can make now, a revised draft and questions to ask next.
  • A log of each doubt, sorted into problem, market, team or place
  • A fix-now list and a fix-later list
  • A revised pitch with the problem and market size first
  • One advice question for the next meeting
• Brand profile builder: Share your website. Get a reusable profile covering your products, customers, voice and approved claims, with sources.
  • A folder of eight plain files, from a start file for your AI to a claims list and a change log
  • A tag on every fact, and every claim marked approved, pending or banned
  • A two-sentence diagnosis of your biggest gap, and a list of what's missing and who can answer it
  • A short slice for your next step, if you name one
• Melanie Perkins: Review a first-use flow or pitch using Melanie Perkins’s recorded approach. Watch beginners, clarify the problem and plan a focused early test.
  • Your problem worked on the way Melanie Perkins would: their questions, their method, their push-back
  • The answer or the work, in Melanie Perkins's voice, using their ideas by name
  • Anything that goes beyond their public record, marked
  • One suggested next step
• Alan Turing: Turn a vague task into clear steps and a fair test. Apply Alan Turing’s recorded approach to models, objections and honest limits.
  • Your problem worked on the way Alan Turing would: their questions, their method, their push-back
  • The answer or the work, in Alan Turing's voice, using their ideas by name
  • Anything that goes beyond their public record, marked
  • One suggested next step

Tasks you can use it for

• You are pitching an idea, a business or a cause to investors, a boss, a board or a group.
• You have pitched a few times, heard no, and cannot tell what to change.
• You want to persuade without pressure tricks or claims you cannot prove.

Limits to check before starting

• You have a finished pitch nobody has heard yet: use the Persuasion and claim editor alone to check it first.
• You need ad or sales copy that sells a product: use the Ad angle planner or the Ad headline writer.
• You need a letter to your customers or members, not a pitch: use the Annual letter writer.

Best way to use this role

Give it one clear outcome, the actual files and a definition of done. Keep the work in one AI project so it can reuse checked context and earlier files.

• Gather your idea, who must back it, and facts you can prove. Add your brand brain if you have one (optional).
• Download the handoff pack. It's a zip with HANDOFF.md and the four skill files, in the order they run: Why-first message writer, Honest persuasion editor, Hardest objections answer writer and Pitch revision log.
• Give the folder to Claude (in Claude Code, or as files in a Claude Project) and say "Follow HANDOFF.md".
• Check the pitch and the objection answers. Anything your AI could not prove is cut or marked MISSING.
• At the pause, pitch to about five people who can say no. Ask what they would change first. Write down each no in their words.
• Paste your notes back, with who said each no. Your AI sorts the doubts and rewrites the pitch.

Read it as data

Read the complete role setup as JSON. Connect your AI to the AI Blocks MCP library and read aiblocks://roles/write-a-short-pitch-and-fix-it-after-every-no for its role instructions and pinned sources.

This is a prepared AI role. No task has run. Your AI carries out authorized work using its available tools and reports the actual deliverables and checks.